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Hi Jane!
Thanks for your letter, it was great hearing from you again. You asked me to tell you about my favourite film. Well, it's Harry Potter.

Harry Potter is a film based on a book written by J. K. Rowling. This film is about a young boy who is a wizard. He goes to the wizard school named Hogwarts and finds two loyal friends there. They together have a lot of adventures during school year. What i like the most about this film is that it is filled with hilarious moments but also keeps you in suspense till the very end.

Special effects are breathtaking. While watching this film you can feel like being in that magical world and learning all that spells with Harry and his friends. The plot is amazing and it keeps you on the edge of the sit during all film. I highly recommend you watching this film.

Tell me about your favourite film in your next letter. Hope to hear from you soon.

Best wishes,
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Hi Jane!
Thanks for your letter, it was great hearing from you again. You asked me to tell you about my favourite film. Well, it's Harry Potter.

Harry Potter is a film based on a book written by J. K. Rowling. This film is about a young boy who is a wizard. He goes to the wizard school named Hogwarts and finds two loyal friends there. They together have a lot of adventures during school year. What i like the most about this film is that it is filled with hilarious moments but also keeps you in suspense till the very end.

Special effects are breathtaking. While watching this film you can feel like being in that magical world and learning all that spells with Harry and his friends. The plot is amazing and it keeps you on the edge of the sit during all film. I highly recommend you watching this film.

Tell me about your favourite film in your next letter. Hope to hear from you soon.

Best wishes,
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